I like it although I feel like it is missing some things for example I feel like the beginning could use another instrument, and maybe have some sort of sweep thing beginning around 0:11. I also feel that the drums could use either some sort of effect that makes them fuller like reverb or something or maybe add some more full drums into the other drums. I really love the part that comes in at 1:04, but it kind of seems out of place because of the previous empty parts. Maybe try introducing a little bit of the lead shortly before 1:04 or try making the previous part less empty or both. Also the drums that come in around 1:28 kind of muffle the sound and make it sound really unsatisfying so maybe do something to stop them from muffling the sound in some way. I love the drop and there's really nothing wrong with it except its a bit short imo and i'd suggest having another part right after the drop thats kinda like more intense and dark but more low-key and less full and then have it end and then transition back into the calm melodic part but thats just personally what I would do. I like how the part around 2:40 isnt the exact same as the one at the beginning and adds another instrument which definitely makes it more full. The last buildup and drop is probably my favorite part, and the ending is fine i'd maybe put some sort of pad or orchestral thing there but its still a good ending. overall cool song i think it is missing some things at some parts though a lot of it is just my personal preference.